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发送短消息 UID 2449 精华 0 查看公共资料搜索帖子 boybe 组别游客生日1970-1-1 帖子107 积分89 性别注册时间2002-02-27	1^# 字体大小: t T 发表于 2002-06-19 20:03 \|只看楼主怀疑今年四六级与Fifa World Cup 有关！小弟写了一篇，望英语好的朋友不吝赐教！ I was not a football fan until this time our team present to FIFA WORLD CUP.I think that it brought many happiness and excitation to all of the Chinese football fans. Although had trying thier best, our team lost. But i still put on steam for our team. Because whether win or lose, all of our team members had shown their skill and leve to the world. Failure　was only the opportunity to more intelligently begin again. All we could do now is to bless our team could find their problem from this match and then grow stronger. But those who aim at great deeds must suffer greatly. I think our team have the strength to go farther and finally make our Chinese football fans' dream come true! :CRY1 :CRY1 :CRY1
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allan_jiang

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最初由 boybe 发布
I was not a football fan until this time our team present to FIFA WORLD CUP.I think that it brought many happiness and excitation to all of the Chinese football fans.
Although had trying thier best, our team lost. But i still put on steam for our team. Because whether win or lose, all of our team members had shown their skill and leve to the world. Failure　was only the opportunity to more intelligently begin again.
All we could do now is to bless our team could find their problem from this match and then grow stronger. But those who aim at great deeds must suffer greatly. I think our team have the strength to go farther and finally make our Chinese football fans' dream come true!
:CRY1 :CRY1 :CRY1

感觉写的很差，呵呵不要扁我
不过要是我写也不一定写得比你好:CRY :CRY :CRY :CRY
我不用英语已经好多年了:mad: :mad: :mad: :mad:

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发送短消息 UID 2449 精华 0 查看公共资料搜索帖子 boybe 组别游客生日1970-1-1 帖子107 积分89 性别注册时间2002-02-27	3^# 字体大小: t T 发表于 2002-06-19 21:34 \|只看楼主自从上了大学，英语水平就每况愈下:CRY :CRY :CRY


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发送短消息 UID 2424 精华 0 3058290 查看公共资料搜索帖子 magicjia 组别游客生日1970-1-1 帖子278 积分299 性别注册时间2002-02-25	4^# 字体大小: t T 发表于 2002-06-19 22:28 \|只看该用户 In the campus of B.F.S.U, we call it "Chinglish" (Chinese English). Haha, try your best to forget your mother tongue when you express your ideas in a foreign language! If you have any questions, contact me at my qq: 3058290. See you budy!


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发送短消息 UID 2449 精华 0 查看公共资料搜索帖子 boybe 组别游客生日1970-1-1 帖子107 积分89 性别注册时间2002-02-27	5^# 字体大小: t T 发表于 2002-06-19 22:38 \|只看楼主谁能把握上面那120字的Cnglish translate to English，我想今年我的作文分应该会不错，呵呵，还不知作文题是什么呢:CRY


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发送短消息 UID 2513 精华 0 查看公共资料搜索帖子 Lorwoo 组别助理经理生日1970-1-1 帖子1187 积分1305 性别注册时间2002-03-06	6^# 字体大小: t T 发表于 2002-06-19 22:55 \|只看该用户我看你还是先把要表达的意思用中文写一下，大家可以更明白一些。改起来也有针对性。


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发送短消息 UID 2366 精华 0 查看公共资料搜索帖子 pdpdpd 组别助理主管生日1970-1-1 帖子536 积分588 性别注册时间2002-02-18	7^# 字体大小: t T 发表于 2002-06-19 23:57 \|只看该用户 A sad topic, a hopeless team. What they brought is nothing but disapointness, what they shown is by bevery means a shame! I had enough of that.


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鲜豆浆

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最初由 boybe 发布
I was not a football fan until this time our team present to FIFA WORLD CUP.I think that it brought many happiness and excitation to all of the Chinese football fans.
Although had trying thier best, our team lost. But i still put on steam for our team. Because whether win or lose, all of our team members had shown their skill and leve to the world. Failure　was only the opportunity to more intelligently begin again.
All we could do now is to bless our team could find their problem from this match and then grow stronger. But those who aim at great deeds must suffer greatly. I think our team have the strength to go farther and finally make our Chinese football fans' dream come true!
:CRY1 :CRY1 :CRY1

很多句子结构的错误啊

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发送短消息 UID 2152 精华 0 查看公共资料搜索帖子寒枫组别资深会员生日帖子1135 积分1298 性别注册时间2002-01-23	9^# 字体大小: t T 发表于 2002-06-20 01:12 \|只看该用户还可以拉（鼓励一下而已）:CRY1 :CRY1 :CRY1 :CRY1


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发送短消息 UID 1115 精华 0 20074788 查看公共资料搜索帖子鲜豆浆组别董事生日1970-8-21 帖子11804 积分13107 性别注册时间2001-10-11	10^# 字体大小: t T 发表于 2002-06-20 01:15 \|只看该用户看多点写作书(最好找作者是Native speaker的)，多写多问，进步很快的，建议第天写2-3篇，然后找水平高点的人帮忙改。
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